Final pin up- 24.01.2011

Here is my revised final masterplan, sequential sketches and sections for my proposal design for Calverley Grounds in Tunbridge Wells.

I took in all the feed back from the previous week and i feel i have made improvements- i am pleased with what i have achieved in just 1 week- obviously i would like to have done more- but the lack of time just did not allow for this. 

Dislikes: trees- lack of contour expressed in plan.

Likes - better use of colour, sketches and sections show areas well.

These drawings are accompanied with the A3 Masterplanning Document- handed in 31.01.2011.

pin up 1st time round,

Here is my 1st attempt at my masterplan, sequential sketches and sections-

feedback:

plan- colour lurid, trees not to scale and too sparse, site look flat

sketches and sections- colour too weak- trees too similar

Composition - sterile

The feedback was great to work from and i agreed with it all- time and pressure took over-